Recently，with the fast department of developed tourism means we can easily to go a famous place for sightseeing and openeyes，in the same time,we relized more convince than before，however also brings some cost problems to us,which i will explain thames in the following two side.
First of all,we can clearly konw there have more disadvantages，some local development of traveling just for earning money form selling the tickes some of famous view has destroied after opening to the public people.Maybe goverment received lots money form the tickets,but someplace hard to repaired them when them has been broken even the benefit not enough to re bulit them,so it is a good fact that we should remind the govement which one is better way.
Furthermore,there have an other bad effects on trips,some of visiter did not have a better behavior when them go to the old place and do great damage.For example,more and more people like to cave them name into the buliding to prove them visited there,what is more,take some of so-called souvenir what is not allow take away.This is a normal action that we always saw them that happened on our front of sighting.
To sum up,both sides of my suggestions.Therefore,between the benefit and cost goverment should think about it carefully and we,then tourist should be enhanced themselves ethical when they are travelling.
Reference:
http://www.idebate.org/debatabase/topic_details.php?topicID=160
http://web1.msue.msu.edu/imp/modtd/33510407.html
http://www.essayforum.com/essay-writing-feedback-3/the-advantages-increased-tourism-outweigh-disadvantages-5884/
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Leo,
ReplyDeleteWhile you include references at the end of the essay, the assignment was to also include 2 in-text references. There are also serious problems with sentence structure that cause difficulties for the readers. Frequent spelling errors and lack of punctuation also cause difficulty, and would be easily avoided with the use of spell-check!!!