Tuesday 3 November 2009

Weekly Writing 3- By Tony

Do the benefits of tourism outweigh the costs?

Travel is becoming cheaper than before, so many countries open their doors in the world, and more and more people want to visit other countries. Do the benefits of tourism outweigh the costs?

Nowadays, with the high technology and the frequency of communities with each other, the travel cost has been decrease more than before. Thus, there are more countries welcome visitors from other countries to travel their nation which it is increasing the income. But tourism also might bring some problem to these countries, such as environment problem, committed crime, etc. However, I think it is rather boon than bane. The tourism in positive way would bring the amount of benefit effect than in negative way.

Initially, the visitors might build the stronger economic what is the reason is for business and travel. Because the people from aboard perhaps take extra consumption and trade. For example, around the beauty spot usually have some small craft markets that it is created by local person who sold the particular souvenir. It is possible one of reason that becomes rich for nation people.

In addition, the tourism would carry into the new and good idea, the innovative skill, and their some intelligence. It is a strong stimulates to reform the social value or the traditional mind in every country. Therefore, some ideas might make great inventions. It created by the interaction of communication.

Above all, it might do your best to welcome and encourage the travelers coming, even promote them to pay more money. Meanwhile, maybe we should discuss how to balance between the life quality and the powerful tourism. Then, the travelers and tourist industry may get a win-win situation.


Reference:
http://www.managementparadise.com/forums/hot-debates-big-fight/31220-do-benefits-tourism-outweigh-costs.html
http://web1.msue.msu.edu/imp/modtd/33510407.html

1 comment:

  1. Tony,

    While you have 2 references at the end of the essay, there is no in-text referencing to show where they are used. Your introduction is brief but to the point. However, your paragraphs are not as clearly defined into main ideas and connected as they should be.

    Also, be careful with unclear and incorrect use of vocabulary, which may make your meaning unclear to the reader. For example:

    (However, I think it is rather boon than bane. The tourism in positive way would bring the amount of benefit effect than in negative way)

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