Monday 2 November 2009

weekly 5 writing

Do the benefits of tourism out weight the costs?
benefit:the most important one is earning money;be more famous;Communication and Cultural Studies;improve the local economytne costs:sth.are old will be de devastated;the traveller share the equipment with the local people;bring the Inconvenienceconclution:the benefit more than the costs,and that is why tourism is the most industry.


Everywhere you can find there are so many sites.It is universally acknowledged that tourism is the largest industry in the world.Everyone need relex,then almost of them will think about have a travelling holiday,and that is why more and more places have sites to attract tourists.In this eaasy I will talk about the tourism on the whole.

First of this essay,I will talk about the benefit.According to the result of the investigation, if the tourism industry do well,it can bring a big profit.I think that it is the most important one why investing in this industry.Sceondly,good site will be famous,it is mean that the city will be attented by famous site,and it is a very important one to impove the local economy.More and more people will come to visit this place,shopping,eating,liveing and so on In all directions.Next side,a good site must has its alluring story.Let people know and commnication the cultural.

Like anything alse,tourism also has dark side.First and foremost, people from ancient times built the Sights,and these are very value to keep.however,too many tourists will devastate the sights,and repair them will lose them value.Secondly,tne local people have to abide the traveller share the equipment.In china,I had one once,I can not find seat in resturant in my hometown because of travellers.The tourists also bring some inconvenience,such as traffic jam,rubbish in everywhere.

sum up the benefit and the costs,in my opinion,benefit is more than costs.The profit from tourism can build more basic equipment,and employ more people to keep the city.Also the tourists should improve their ethical standards.
No Reference,just reference my classmates.

1 comment:

  1. Terry,

    The assignment was to use 2 references and you failed to this. Your essay needs data and information to support your argument and develop your ideas. While your essay structure is clear, it lacks an academic focus. Be careful with correct use of punctuation and spacing, which is easily fixed through spell-check.

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