Sunday 1 November 2009

Weekly Writing 3- By Candy

Today, tourism is one of the largest industries in today's world economy and is a great source for many developing countries, whose use their natural resources. Meanwhile the travel cost has been more reduce than before, so more and more people choose tour. As a result, a lot of countries pay numerous many to develop tourism.But we need analyse about that it really only take good side for country?
Firstly,we can not be denied,it's a good way to help a country to increase the income, especailly in developing country where only stand-by tourism, it might worth to develop and encourage the travelers coming, even pay more money on the promotion.Because the more people from aboard perhaps take extra consumption and trade. It is possible the growing tourism might become the one of reasons to put nation turn the rich side.
Secondly, tourism might also cause some trouble in messing environment, and crowned space.Maybe you can see some developing countries try to stay in the world, they great efforts to develop tourism, but the result is the evironment has been destroied and the inhabitants' lifing has been disturbed that they don't have enough right to live.Like Most of the islands in the Caribbean, including Jamaica, try to make the best out of this, taking everything out of the environment and causing damage to their land that sometimes can be permanent.
From two side I can say, although tourism brings us to the point that even tough economic well being and development of the country depends on this multi-million industry, tourism has its downside. Negative effects caused by tourism industry can be very costly to the country and its population.So I don't suppose the rising tourism in positive way would bring the amount of benefit and the amazing effect exceed in negative one.In the meantime, maybe we should find a way can balance of the life quality and the powerful tourism, let help development of tourism can be a positive economic step.

reference: http://web1.msue.msu.edu/imp/modtd/33510407.html www.debatingmatters.com/topicguides/topicguide/tourism/

1 comment:

  1. Candy,

    There needed to be 2 references and in-text referencing, according to the assignment. While you use transitional words, paragraphing needs to be more clearly defined. Complex sentence structures are often grammatically incorrect, causing minor strain for reader.

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