Sunday 1 November 2009

Weekly Writing #3-----------------JIN

Nowdays,many people like traveling. With the increasing quantity of traveler,the tourism develops in a surprising speed.That causes a few problems, such as environment problem,culture problem,and so on.This article will discuss whether the benefits of tourism overweight the costs.

As we know, tourism may cause the ruin of environment. It will cause the over-explored problem,and some natural viewpoints will be changed to artifical viewpoints.That’s a cost of tourism.Over-developed tourism “may attract visitors whose lifestyles and ideas conflict with the community’s”.It can be seen as culture conflict.These are a lot of other costs of tourism,how to deal with them is a tough test for local communities and government.

Tourism also will bring lots of benefits.Tourism will be one of the largest industry in the world. It’s out of question that tourism will bring income for local areas.(form Fraser Coast,2003). “Facilities and infrastructure developed for tourism can also benefit residents”.That means more jobs will be provided,more public facilities will be built,local people’s lives will be improved,according to the ideas on geographyfieldwork.com.

The costs of tourism can not be avoided,bu can be relieved.As the environment protecting,in a long term,the tourism agents will realize that customers expect them to provide a intact destination.That may encourage the activities of protecting and renewing environment.(Currie,2009) If tourism agents and government can help establish the communication between tourists and residents,culture conflict can be relieved.

To conclude,the benefits of tourism can overweight the costs.However,it depends on the specific plans and legislations.If government and communities can realize the effects caused by tourism and try to improve it,the tourism industry will become a clean,valuable industry not only for local residents,but also for environment.

References:http://geographyfieldwork.com/TourismProsCons.htm
http://visitharveybay.info/membership/membership/benefits-of-tourism.cfm

Cost-benefit analysis of alien vegetation clearing for water yield and tourism in a mountain catchment in the Western Cape of South Africa BY Currie B ,in 2009

1 comment:

  1. Jin,

    This is a well-structured essay and clearly answers the question overall. However, be careful that wherever you quote within an essay, there is also an in-text reference. Also, your first body paragraph is not very clear due to the choice in vocabulary. Your thesis statement is clear, but could give an indication of the point of view you will show within your essay.

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