Sunday 1 November 2009

Weekly Writing 3- By Peng

In this day and age, with the development of technology and economy the transport can provide more convenient services to tourists. Many countries elaborate their tourism to earn more money. Whether the tourism brings more costs or benefits to human it is still has consideration.

Tourism provides the welfare of the residents of the region. First and foremost, tourism promotes the economy of some region aid them to earn more money. In addition, it can increase the number of employment. There is a research shows that the tourism is increase about 10 per cent in recent decade.

However, tourism has many disadvantages to some region. Firstly, it has huge negative effect on natural environment. In china at some attractions were destroyed because of too many tourists. Secondly, tourism affects the local lifestyle. Last but not mean the least, the tourism will change the culture of some local region. Many cultures are disappearing in this world because of the tourism. You can not hard to imagine that the tourism to some region which preserve their traditional culture which will be swapped by the increasing number of tourists.

To sum up, the tourism will bring many negatives to some regions and affect their life culture. In my personal prospect the local government should take this phenomenon to consider. May be they should announce some policies to protect (eg: Restrictions on the number of tourists) the local culture.


Reference: http://pubsindex.trb.org/view.aspx?id=133509http://www.exampleessays.com/viewpaper/33263.html

1 comment:

  1. Peng,

    While your essay has a fairly clear structure and point of view, it does not use references within the text, according to the assignment. If you mention research that supports your argument, you must reference it. Be careful with expressions such as "In my personal prospect". The correct phrase would be "In my personal opinion/From my point of view." Try to develop more complex sentence structures using linking words.

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