Today study abroad has become the world trend and theme.Meanwhile,English as one of the mainstream languge is ever-increasingly accepted and untilized by more nations.So numerous students choose Britain.Why we choose UK,excpet front reason,it exist different culture between British and Chinese.
In my view point,this issue should be analyzed in a more objectivemanner,neither bad or good.On one side,it is can compare with education.In China,they choose exam-oriented,exam it's very important,it's a most major factor balance a student,exam occupy our main life,we study just like for pass exam,if you want to enter a higher school,you need accept exam,you only get high scores,you'll be allowed.But in Britain,maybe I can say,ability-oriented,in UK,although you lost in exam,but you are did well in peacetime,or if you have skill,you also can enter a higher school.The second side,I think China lack of careativites and imagination,sometimes they like imitating,that not mean copy,usually they choose the superior point,then extend it.In my opinion,British more strong in creative,because they invention a lot of thing,they are all useful for our life.On the third side,China is famous in cuisine,it have a long history,it created some special dishes,you can taste it only in China,it also they have different kind of food and very delicious.But in Braint,to be honest,the food is terrible,it's monotonous and fixed.
In summary there is exist cultural differences,but there should be no cultures shock,somebody dicide go abroad,not only study language,but also intereting in culture.we should love our own culture and also need study other countries's,because different culture can bring different feel and can make the life clourful.
Thank you Candy for your ideas.
ReplyDeleteI like how you express your open-minded perspective in the introduction and conclusion, providing a well-presented observation on two cultures.
A few points:
Be very careful about punctuation!!!! You use TOO MANY commas, and do not use full stops, and capitalization to distinguish sentences. This is very important to a clear writing style! Try to avoid spelling mistakes by using a dictionary or spell check when writing on the computer.
You need to separate main ideas into paragraphs to provide a clear structure and progression for your argument.
Be careful about misuse of vocabulary to make sure your ideas are well explained (ex: British food is fixed??)
Overall, this is a well-thought out essay, which needs improvement in structure, use of punctuation, and grammar primarily. Good job!