what will you do when you have holidays? I think most of you will choose trip.In nowadays, the pressure from society and work is increase. So people should have a way to relax. Then, the tourism develops strongly. So many tourists go to the travel sites to visit. While, do you think the safety of the sites?
Indeed, the tourism's development drives economic increase. And tourism develops a new industy. Also, people can know the history deeply by visiting. While, the destory by them also make the sites unperfect. Of course, different people have different views.
Some think tourism makes more people have jobs, the road wide and improve the local people's life. Secondly,make the culture including festival and pyhsical history knew widely. Secondly, enviromental protection.Economic drives preserve nature,wildlife and urban cleanliness.Next is foreign exchange.For instance, resources to import food, pharmaceutical ,technology and conumer goods.(From Travel and Tourism-Environment, Economics,Education.)
The opposite side think culture destory. Cultural destruction insists of loss languge, religion, rituals, material culture. And environmental destruction(game drives, resorts: golf, ski, beach, desert, world as play ground.And so on.(From Travel and Tourism-Environment, Economics, Education.)
So what can i do about this?Support the traditional cultural legacy and patronize locally produced products.Maybe sth. else.
In conclusion, economic develpment of course is very important, while, also focus on the local enviroment.Then tourism will walk longer.
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Lucy,
ReplyDeleteYou mention references within the text but provide no full references at the end. You have abbreviations and informal language throughout your essay, which do not fit the correct academic standards. The paragraphing is off at times when you create a separate paragraph for 2 short sentences.
ex: So what can i do about this?Support the traditional cultural legacy and patronize locally produced products.Maybe sth. else.
Also, be careful to avoid overusing questions within an academic essay. One would be acceptable, but more reduces the formal register of the writing. There are also serious mistakes in grammar and sentence structures that cause difficulties for the reader.