This essay would talk about culture in different countries between Britian and China.There are a number of difference in many respects,such as catering culture,rhythm of life and the important particular side of every culture is how its people deal with time.
In Chain，people eat 3 meals everyday normally.Breakfast is the most important meal in
3 meals，Enjoy a nutritious breakfast in the morning. The delicious food will bring you good mood for a whole day.Lunch time in China is 11：00—12：30，people will eat much more，make sure enough power to work next 4 or 5 hours.In the evening，people just eat less food，it is a good way to keep healthy.However，british people are not very particular about the food.The most different is that rice is main food in China,bread in UK.
I have been England 5 months,I have a rudimentary knowledge of it.British often enjoying their free time.When I first view in churchill square on bank holiday，lots of shops were closed.This appearance had never in china,businessman will used this choice to earn moer money than normol day.
I remembered a proson said'If you win time, you win everything'.Chinese have a deeply recognizion for time.simultaneously british have two sides to deal with time，one is in working hours,they must be strictly obeyed.another one is in free time.
These are all my recognizes about culture in china and britian.
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Hi Terry,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your ideas! This is a well structured essay with a good introduction that outlines your main ideas.
Be careful with referring to yourself too often in the essay. You don't need to mention that you don't know much about the differences. The essay is only to talk about your observations so far.
I like your use of a quote to open paragraph 4. Be sure to always develop ideas clearly and fully if they are to be their own paragraph. Paragraphs 3 and 4 are both about time and are separated, so either develop them more or unite them into one paragraph with one main idea.
Be careful about punctuation, spelling, and misuse of vocabulary. (ex: recognizes in the conclusion is not the correct form of the word. It is a verb. A better word would be observations).
Thank you and good job!