Nowadays, a long stay in the same surroundings to make everything the same, so with the rapid economic development and continuous improvement of people's living standard, more and more people like taking a trip. I think tourism can bring large benefits for society, but if tourism outweight the cost, it also negative for tourism industry. In this essay, it aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from advantage, disadvantage and bring up some effective solution of this issue.
First and foremost, it is beyong any dispute that tourism can contribute to economic growth and gevelopment. It can provide better oppertunities for career and ti does`t need high work skills. In addition, tourism is a no smoke industry, it does`t bring pollution for environment. It does bring good mood and wide horizon for people. Therefore, tourism is very useful for society, it is a vital important industry.
However, if benefits of tourism outweight the costs and over committing tourism, there will destroy the tourism industry. For instance, thousands upon thousands of foreign visitors are crowding into some scenic spots of China, receipt so many tourists that exceed the ceiling, the uncivilized behavior will be seen eberywhere and tour facilities will be damaged(Hongxia 2007). It impact other tourists visit mood and quality. It also affect the sustainable development of tourism.
Solving the negative factor of tourism is very necessary. Inevitable, as a operator, they should reinforce management to protect tour facilities and improve service scale and holding capability. Another equally important factor lies in controle numbery of tourists. The tourist must aviod the tourism rush hour. Lastly but not least, government should strengthen the publicity and education to tourists(Yutian 2008). Let`s tourists realized the importance of protect tour facilities and civilized behavior in tourism.
In conclusion, we should emancipated the mind and promote the tourism scientific progress. In the foreseeable future, let`s tourism bring more benefit to mankind!
Reference: http://www.visitbritain.com/ http://www.visitsoutheastengland.com/
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Justin,
ReplyDeleteYour essay is clearly structured for the most part. Your thesis statement provides a clear outline for the essay.
However, the assignment was to use two references both in-text and at the end of text. If you reference something at the end of a text, then there must be an in-text reference there as well! Plus, any in-text references should therefore have a full reference at the end of text.
Also, there are some problems with grammatical structure and vocabulary that make your meaning unclear.
For example:
"However, if benefits of tourism outweight the costs and over committing tourism, there will destroy the tourism industry. "
This sentence has an awkward structure and does not clearly outline the focus of the paragraph.