Saturday 31 October 2009

Weekly Writting 3 ___By Cherry

In present day society ,hundreds of millions of people travel around the globe for leisure time .The booming tourist industry has created more job openings .Many people have said goodbye to poverty though involvement in tourist business .But people ,nevertheless,hold various opinion in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse .Every coin has its two sides .

Tourism contributes significantly to a country a country is economy . It plays activity in boosting the gross domestic production ,promoting the internal demand demand ,and increasing foreign currency revenue .Tourism impels the improvement and completion of a county is infrastructure ,and has given birth to many industrial sectors. .In addition, railways ,highways,and waterways transportation have been noticeably lifted ,plus the development of the building ,telecommunication ,catering ,recreational industry.

Anything is not any advantage without disadvantage.Firstly tourism gives rise to a series of environmental issues ,broken the ecosystem of the scenic spots .Because too much tourism ruins the natural habitates of wildlife .Secondly ,tourism may do damages to the local lives ,if too many tourism are crowded into public places ,that are also enjoying the locals ,the resident normal life can be disrupted.

To sum up, tourism brings new money into an area and generates jobs ,income and tax revenues.By contrast ,tourism may cause serious environmental pollution ,and undermine local traditions and ways of life .So their views have both merit and dismerit .We should find the right balance with tourism development.

Refeneces:http://bluesunnysky.blog.163.com/blog/static/569469462008102162233770
http://www.tcc.org.cn/xxlr1.asp?id=352

1 comment:

  1. Cherry,

    Your essay has a clear structure but does not follow the assignment in that there are not 2 references within the text. There are grammatical problems with complex sentence structure that cause minor difficulties for the reader. Be careful with proofreading as there are several instances of word repetition.

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