With the most popular of the English language and development of modern globalizing tourism, more and more Chinese people traveled to the UK for discovering the cultural differentiation between China and England. In China students start to learn English at
them early years and most of them want to learn the different life style or plan to study go aboard. my thesis will talk about the factors on student to make out the two countris.
Firstly,communion is obviously different.Chinese person do not like to share his thought with other in the speaking because ours background teached us we need hide it so that let the listener to guess my will.However, British completely sameness with Chinese when they are talking because they would like to explain mind of themselves in the first time.Therefore most of students are unsuitable when they are for the first time.For example,if you are cooking food and i want to eat it then i will say that must be delicious what more English students will say thanks might not invite me，but in China you have to speak to me what let us enjoy it together.All lot of them belong to the different culture and surroundings that they were recived education form the civilization.
Secondly,the normal daily timetable is cearily diversity.China,most of people like to weak up early and fall sleep too which that is healthy for us.But in my memory i think large number of British different with Chinese.For instance,in my country human usually woke up before 6AM then they would like to do exercise for training body of themselves，however man like to do sports at the afternoon and the though that the air is most fresh than other times.In my opinion,the timetable might be changed by the weather.
To sum up,enhance the people to learn different culture between China and the UK from the natural people can educate the open eyes of people and find out the resource of history.
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Thank you, Leo, for your interesting essay.
ReplyDeleteYou have some very good ideas and you show an ability to analyze and explain your ideas with examples and your own point of view. You have a strong introduction and conclusion that help make your structure clear. There is a good use of paragraphing and transitional sentences.
My main comment is that sometimes, misuse of vocabulary and awkward sentence structure make your meaning unclear. Particularly in the first body paragraph, there are some difficulties in understanding your meaning. You say communion is different- do you mean communication? Be careful because they are very different! Also, the noun form of similar is similarity, not sameness.
Also, try to practice using punctuation in English more, as a lack of commas and capitalization where necessary sometimes make writing less clear.
Overall, this is a well thought out and argued essay. Good job!