Wednesday 21 October 2009

Weekly Writing-------------Lucy

1st: secretly----it's a secret and the others can't see it.
e.x.: Don't make the others know this action.
2nd: guilty----feel so sorry about sth.
e.x.: The man who was a pick-pocketing before will feel very sorry when he is a put-pocketing now.
3rd: distinguish----tell the difference
e.x.: This activity's aim is discriminate the real and false pick-pocketing.
4th: well-off----lucky
e.x.: The people whose pock has the money is lucky.
5th: broadband----online
e.x.: People can see the activity online

the key words: antionwide, challenge, distinguish, well-off, special ID

In conclusion: People who pick money from others change the role to put money back and this activity developed all over the city. And they have a special ID to show they are not the thife.Aims to tell the different between pick-pocketing and put-picketing.People maybe feel lucky about this.

1 comment:

  1. Lucy,

    You did not clearly grasp the main idea of the article as it was to describe a current plan of the Talk Talk company to 'put-pocket' those in need. The aim of the article is not to tell the difference between that and pick-pocketing, but to explain the actions of Talk Talk.

    Your key words should also reflect key information, such as who (talk talk), what (put-pocketing), where and when (london, july-august.)

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